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A Start to New Beginnings

Once upon a time...
  • ...Something else was happening... Somewhere else
     Episode #2
Aug 01, 2008   08:02
Rating: G
Author: Blueversusred

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Back in time in ancient...

  • Somewhere else.
     Episode #20
Dec 01, 2008   04:00
Rating: G
Author: sexycloning

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Interactive Editions

Here begins a section of the Interactive Story for "Interactive Editions" of stories posted in the forum's "Reading Room".

The rules are as follows:

Take a story from the Reading Room, and copy it into a series of episodes below. Break in into multiple episodes at various points, and add appropriate options.

You don't have to break it only at the ends of chapters. However, the entire story should not all be in one episode. Break it at any point you can think of where it could go different ways, and add any options you think might be appropriate or interesting. The option that leads to the "original" story path doesn't have to be the first one.

You and other people will then be able to write their own continuations and alternate storylines based on that story and using that story's characters.

IMPORTANT: If you are not the writer of the original story, make sure you get the writer's permission to do so before posting that story. Do not post stories without the original writer's permission. It may even be best to put the original writer's name in the "Your name or handle" field instead of your own.

So let's see Interactive Editions of stories by:
  • Someone else.
     Episode #1525
Oct 23, 2011   00:31
Rating: G
Author: deux_bag

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Someone Else

"The sex? The sex was good. The sex was always good with her. You don't hustle your way down the line of women you could be with just to settle on anyone. Of course the sex was good."


"But nothing. You're not paid to pry"

"I can tell by the way you continue to repeat it that you're trying to convince yourself more than convince me. There's something missing, isn't there." The shrink spoke more with certainty than inquisitiveness.

He paused for a second. The ceiling fan ran at a pace too slow to cool his face. "Well..."

His voice betrays him, but the shrink lets him continue. "Sometimes I like to head to the corner store on 6th and Bayswater. It's the only store in the area without crossing the tracks into downtown. You know how the cargo trains can be... Anyways, the worst feeling I have is when the man at the counter runs out of my favorite drink. It's a bottled brand, a vintage soft drink for hot days that remind you of the best parts of winter. It's expensive too but I somehow manage to clean him out each time I buy it. It's that kind of feeling, you know?"

The shrink took some notes, looked in his eyes. "She runs out of steam in bed?"

"I don't want to say it that way, doc, but you know how it is..." He mumbles off at the end, a futile attempt to hide his embarrassment.

"It makes sense. I know exactly the thing to help you, actually. An old friend of mine is staying in town across the bridge. Take your wife. Tell her it's a couple's spa" The shrink writes out a note on a piece of paper, folds it in thirds and stamps it with string and a wax seal. "It's old fashion work, but they say there's a certain wisdom in the old ways. That's the best I can do for you right now, but anyways. Same time, next week?"

"Yeah, of course."

"Give the missus my regards," the shrink says, shutting the office door behind him.

'What now', he asks you in his mind?
  • Listen to the expert. It's time for 'Spa day'
     Episode #4329
Sep 02, 2017   05:55
Rating: G
Author: funkduder

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"Spa day"

The address written outside the note actually leads you under the bridge. It's just on the other side, but that's a matter of semantics. "The Blue & Red Spa" flashes on a neon sign on an easel inside a run down building. The glass windows are very obviously broken, although care was taken to clean the dirt off of every piece still hanging from the frame.  In the sunset, it's difficult to see further than the freshly cleaned carpet leading down a hall. A door is visible just before the line of shadows.

"Are you sure this is the place?" she asks him.

"The address matches the note. It's a shame about the window though."

"More like it's creepy. I'm not sure I like this idea, baby."

He doesn't bother to look at her as he looks down the hall. It leads to a door and counter like that of a doctor's office. "I can see a bell on the inside. Let's just ring it and see. I'm sure it's just an accident and they'll have it cleaned up later. The inside looks fine."

Something in her head knows that something is up. She's asks you in her head what to do
  • It seems fine. It's not like a store window hasn't been broken before.
     Episode #8251
Sep 02, 2017   06:09
Rating: G
Author: funkduder

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'What could possibly go wrong?'

Past the neon sign, the first thing you notice is that the room is dimly lit, but the lights are actually on in this abode. He rings the bell on the counter.

A long half minute goes by awkwardly.

She's about to give up but instead is interrupted by the sound of two doors opening, which might as well have been a gunshot given how quiet the area was. Two sets of heeled shoes are thumping on the carpet, out of sight from the left and right. Soon a pair of eerily similar women arrive at the counter.

"Your invitation?" the couple the hear in stereo.

He pulls out sealed letter. The women are too tall for their faces to be seen at the counter, but their donned robes do a terrible job of hiding the size of their breasts. It's hard not to stare until she give him a jab on the side. Hers are nothing to scoff at either, but perhaps due to the time, he'd been taking her for granted.

"Come on in, sir. You've been expected." The two beckon in stereo. One of the hits a button, prompting a buzzer. The other opens the door, holding it backwards.

Peeking through, the layout is like a doctor's office, but with dimmer lighting and a few notable changes. The walls here are hardwood and add an old style ambiance. A vase sits in on a marble table in a concave area of the wall with a single rose inside. Down to the left, there are a number of doors with various labels. The right leads to a set of stairs.

"Feel free to explore before meeting the master on the second floor," the one at the desk says.

"I think you'll find the selection of amenities to be quite satisfying for your needs," the one by the door says.

He looks at his lover in the eyes. She's nervous but will follow your lead. You get the feeling that this is your last chance to leave.
  • "Might as well meet the master first. No use holding off"
     Episode #8255
Sep 02, 2017   18:04
Rating: G
Author: funkduder

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"Master" of the house

He lets the twins guide you up the stairs and as the lead in front of the couple, you get to notice their backroom 'assets'. Their curves are complemented by the robes. You couldn't say whether they were pure silk or maybe a combination of different elements, but then again, you're just staring at their asses.

The twins stop at a double door and turn around.

"It was a pleasure to meet the two of you"
"It was a pleasure to meet the two of you"

The double doors are opened by their arms and the interior of the room is dark, yet something drives you forward into it nonetheless. Dim lights illuminate the chairs in front of a desk and an even larger chair. It was reminiscent of those corporate tactics to diminish employees and partners having a seat to talk.

"Have a seat" a woman's voice says. You hear the doors close behind you. It sounds strangely similar to the women from the lobby but you aren't 100% sure if it was them for a second. The chair spins around, revealing a third woman like the ones who led you inside, except that she is dressed for work.

In more formal clothes, you realize that her height is accentuated by an 80s fro that she styles. Her skin is darker, but her eyes shine a bright blue. Maybe she's half black? Your eyes drift down to her chest which are partially obscured by a silver platter carry rum and cola.

"Care for a drink?" she asks.
  • Sure. You've been very hospital so far.
     Episode #8258
Sep 07, 2017   06:59
Rating: G
Author: funkduder

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Things get woozy

You toast and drink to "long marriages and a happy new life" before drinking. Your mind wanders off as suddenly you feel out of body -- out of mind. The room spins in a way you didn't think it... *thunk*

Her heels hit the floor like a hammer as she makes tidal waves in the ground. Long dark hands rise from the waves to drag you under a sea of women. Their beautiful, but they look hungrier than sharks. The light dims. It darkens curves and turns her into a silhouette of the beautiful woman you know. Her form blossoms and splits surrounds you. You're taken under, deep into the sea until it begins to feel chilling, as though for being her, they're cold, lifeless...

You wake up to the cold strapped down and naked. The table is already starting to move out of some sort of machine via conveyor belt. You look down at your breasts and you try to remember, but you can't. Your slender arms, your long legs. These are the traits that make you and define you now. Your twin sisters join you and begin to loosen the straps and assign you to your next task.


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     Episode #8271
Sep 13, 2017   06:45
Rating: X
Author: funkduder <funkduder @ gmail · com>

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