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PostPosted: Sun Jun 17, 2018 8:35 am 
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Wow, 22double got my fantasy jot down to the core. This was my fantasy when I had a teacher back when I was in 7-8 grade. Instead in mine, the teachers fought. And it does looks like it's gonna go that way.


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PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2018 1:55 am 
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I love the feedback, I saw this and wrote part 2 and continued another one of my stories, hope you guys enjoy.


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PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2018 3:55 am 
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Wow, u did it again, even hotter. Lol, erotic. This is turning me on.


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PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2018 8:57 pm 
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I will add mine to the others' praise. Great idea and well executed.

I would only recommend that you not rush it. The story is building in intensity quite nicely. Work that and enjoy the build. Don't rush to the climax.

Keep up the great work.
DV


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